The night before, he’d touched her hand and discovered Lana, a jaguar and therefore enemy of his Pack was his mate. I liked how it brought out the West Side Story feel of the werewolves versus the jaguars, but my editor at the time wanted to know how this “mate thing” was affecting Adam. Originally, I had this scene the next morning after Lana had shifted into a jaguar. In the case of MOONLIGHT, I ended up deleting a scene and writing a new one near the beginning. If you’re lucky, a good editor will see beyond the scenes that are already there, to see what might make the book stronger. The answer sounds wishy-washy, but the truth is, yes and no. One of the big questions most authors get is, did your editor make you change your book once you signed the contract? Moonlight – Director’s Cut – aka Deleted Scene
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